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Wednesday, 7 November 2012

Master Shifu Writing

Long time ago outside the training door of the peace Valley there was a lonely  little snow leopard who was lying on top of the stairs. i gently picked it up and took it to the training room. i had trained him many years until he was growing older and older.then he was trained to be the dragon warrior he had been angry because he wasn't chosen to be our dragon warrior but then my brother master oog wei he had saw that tai lung had darkness in his heart.

The next year later my friend named po had a dream about him being in the furious five then he realized that it wasn't real.he woke up and then he tried to stand up but he couldn't then he stood up again and he made a noise and my friends dad could the duck goose bird he yelled out my friend po what is going on nothing he said so he walked as fast as he could down the stairs, and cheerfully delivered out the noodles to the costumes

Choosing of the dragon warrior my friend told everyone to go to the choosing of the dragon warrior then pos dad said would you go and deliver the noodles he was so angry that he had to take the noodles. then he went and he saw that the stairs were long going
He realized that there was a paper that said up the hill he pushed and pushed it up and he said that he was nearly there but when he looked down he was still there.

He lifted the noodles there and ran up when he got there he was puffed out.then the door was going to close so he yelled out wait,wait then he. then the door shut ted on him he was figuring out what to do so he looked in the little hole and it was starting then when he looked though again as the wind blew the the cover to close it so my friend po was looking for something to get in the dragon plaice so he got on a brunch and swag

It side to side and then he flew onto the the house and landed on to the platform were the fireworks were.so then he fort of and idea he tied the fireworks on to the chair and he lit it up and he waited for it to  BLAST then the chiar had fell so it didnt work.NEK MINIT he had blast though the wall rubbing hes face againest to the wall then flyng every were and
then he fell into the middle of the palace he had just fell in front of marster ogg wei

He picked my friend as dragon warrior. I was so lost what to do being a dragon warrior
they crowed cheered and then came four pigs lifting my friend on a stretcher and took him to the palace he was lost so he  saw the sword of heroes then he went he to see the vase and he touched it then it had cracked open so then master shifu didn't like po
he wasn't ready to fight he was just a fat chubby panda he didn't know how to fight

So then early in the morning he told everyone to came out of their cabins the tiger,crane,
monkey,viper snake,primantis came but then were was po we went to the training room







1 comment:

RKELLY said...

Hey, Tim - I wonder if you could proof read this story (check punctuation and "sense" ) then repost it I think it is a great story but would be even better with a little checking.

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