I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 7 and my teacher is Ms Ah Kui.
Wednesday, 20 February 2013
The Fourth Fastest Man Who Ever Lived
The Fourth Fastest Man Who Ever Lived
Yohan Blake is at the London Olympic Games 2012 for the 200 meter finals. The crowd was roaring as like the top of the roof was going to come down. He was getting warmed up and listening to his beats headphones waiting in Anticipation for the officials to announce his name. He was so nervous and scared.
After all the training he's done now this is the day he shows it. when he got nervous and scared he went to the mens changing room and got his gear on and came outside onto the tracks as the officials announce his name. As they took their position Yohan Blake is standing on lane 4 stretching his carv muscles. As time ticks the officials introduces them.
On lane 1 is Asafa Powell,on lane 2 is Tyson Gay,on lane three Usain Bolt and on lane 4 Yohan Blake. As the officials announce take your position now. this is it the finals ON YOUR MARKS,GET SET,G O
As they take the lead Usain Bolt is coming a tie with Yohan Blake as tyson gay trying to catch up. as they go Yohan Blake shivers down the line coming first beating The man who hasn't lost a race in his entire career. Usain Bolt can not believe this but as the two Jamaicas
Stands in front of the hole London Olympic 2012 winners the roaring crowd are like nothing he has felt before yohan blake is bursting with pride as the commentator puts the camera on him running around representing his country with a smile on his face.
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Timothy
I absolutely loved your choice of a title for this piece of writing, it caught my attention and wanted to make me read more and learn about who was the fourth fastest person in the world. I loved thinking about Yohan Blake and how he must have felt and I think its an awesome topic to write about Timothy. Great idea.
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