Narrative Writing - 2013

How Cheetahs Got Their Spots!!!...

How Cheetahs Got Their Spots!!!

A long, long time ago when animals can Dance and Sing, their lived a cheetah, the only one of his kind, who is not deceased. This cheetah had beautiful, Snowy clear white, smooth fur and was very quick on his feet, therefore the other animals called him Ice age.

His prey could not easily escape him, and he could always find lots of wild animals like Meerkats,Buffalo and many more. so whenever he was hungry, he would go down to his

territory and he would always find something close by to eat.Ice age parents died from his prey.

One day Ice age was wandering off down the forest, a man named Bolt came running with full speed, heading towards Ice Age. Ice age was frightened and he ran and ran as fast as he could. Running was something Ice age was good at.

But suddenly Ice age thought of a good idea he decided to blend in with the surroundings.It seemed liked Ice age the cheetah was very hungry and was very good at hunting.

Ice Age was looking sharp as mr Bolt told ice age the cheetah to strike the tree very hard as he could. Ice age struck it with all his mighty power but suddenly when he he struck it a enormous beehive came tumbling down going straight towards  ice age . But all of a sudden he was captured in minutes from the beehive so Ice age the cheetah hooked on his turbo and ran fast down to the river a BIG splash from ice age. As soon as he got out of the river he didn’t notice that their was spots on him.He shooked of the wetness away from him and he twist and turn back to the river...

Remeber The Titans...

Remember The Titans

WALT - identify and evaluate the main messages in the movie

‘Remember the Titans’

Find the meaning of the following words using an online dictionary:

1. Segregation- this word means the action or state of setting someone or something apart from other people.
2. Discrimination-The unjust or prejudicial treatment of different categories of people or things.
3. Prejudice-preconceived opinion not based on reasons or experience
4. Integration-The action or process of integrating
5. Respect-A feeling of deep admiration for someone or something elicited by their abilities, qualities,or achievements

Complete these questions thoughtfully:

1. What event in the movie encourages the Titans to start to work together as a team? When the coach Boone told them to stick their heads in and shoulders up like work to together not fight.

2. What do you think Coach Boone meant by “play this game like men”?  Explain your answer. Like dont play it like you're not even out there putting your best at it. And start playing like men

3. How did you feel when one player said to the other, “Back to the real world—we’d have been better staying where we were.” I felt like black and white people changed and started getting along with each other.

4. How much do the opinions of people around you influence you and your actions? Negative people take you through the bad path while good people take you through the good path.

5. What changed for Coach Yoast from the start of the movie, compared to the end of the movie? That his boys were communicating with coach boone boys as they have been winning their games

6. What happened between these two people (Coach Boone and Coach Yoast) to cause such a close connection?  How did their relationship develop and change throughout the movie? Coach Boone and coach Yoast learnt that friendship can come from any cultra and colour of skin that you have as long as you have life

7. Have you ever stood up for what you believed was right, even though others didn’t approve of your stance?  Explain your answer.Yes because I believe in God and I always tell my next door neighbors to go church because they didn’t believe God was true and his sins in you.

8. Have you ever taken a stand even though doing so would cause you to lose something important to you?I have slapped my dad on the head and didn’t liked me.So he punished me and I then went to the room.

9. How would you feel, if you weren’t allowed to play sport with your friends or weren’t allowed to go to the same school as friends, because they were a different culture to you? I would feel like I’m stuck in a cage with no friends and just a empty space. I would lay on my bed and listen to the sound of the birds.

10. What can the story of the ’71 Titans tell us about our world today?It told me not to be racist just shake their hands. And

11.What can the story of the ‘71 Titans teach us about life?

My-Autobiography

This week I presented my autobiography in front of my class. There are personal information I have deleted because I'm being  cyber smart.

Narrtive Forms....

Monday 27 May 2013...

WALT:Identify and explain the main features of a narrative text.

Narrative text.

T-Title

O-Orientation

P-Problem

S-Solution

A narrative text is a well explained made up story.

Language...

1. Positive
2. Poetic
3. Dialogue
4. Knowledge
5. Talking
6. Actions
7. INteresting
8. language
9. Describing
10. Good
11. Links
12. Characters
13. Do not introduce a new problem in your ending or solution.
14. Solution
15. Conversation
16. Narrator
17. Wondering
18. Comments
19. ?
20. Coda-Moral
21. Eventually
22. Meanwhile
23. Suddenly without warning
24. By the time
25. For a moment.

These are the words and structure that I will follow to help me with my narrative test during next week...

Narrative Forms...

This is a Popplet I put together to show my understanding what a Narrtive is...

Timothy And Edwards Netball Presentation.......

This is a presentation me and my partner have put together to show the audience Netball Skills......

How To Brush Your Teeth.....

Direction for: How To Brush Your Teeth

You need: Toothbrush,Toothpaste,Tap

First you: You get out of bed walk your way to the bathroom.

Second you: Go to the bathroom and get your tooth brush and squase the toothpaste on your brush.

Then you: And you brush your teeth as clean possible. For 3 minutes Left to right.

Finally you: After you brush your teeth clean. You then wash your smooth face with water.

My Ancestral Poem

This is my Ancestral Poem

My Autobiography

This week I presented my autobiography in front of my class. There are some personal formation I deleted because I'm being cyber smart.

In my presentation I shared interesting information about my life,inspirations and future aspirations.

My Autobiography

Who I am?

My name is Timothy it means the holy bible. I am 12  years old turning 13. I am a NZ born, I was raised up in a town in Hawks Bay.

You may not know this but I am Soloman Island and Samoan and my mum Soloman Island.

Education/History

My first school I went to was St Annes it was a Catholic School I  started with a shy day I was with a samoan  lady called Mrs Nu’u. Me and my sister started . both on the same day.

Aspirations

Me	Steps to achieve my future aspirations
2013	Try to finish  and  my hardest to complete year 8
2014/2019	Starting  a good college. And take subjects that will help achieve my aspirations-like science-english
2020	Travel to University  and start of with the  basics.
2023	I would be out there supporting my family and finally achieved  what I wanted to achieve

• Dad. My Dad  inspires me to become a famous rugby player because he works hard in our family and that what I would like to do work hard to reach my goals.......
  
  

My four walls..............

This is my Four walls of self sit back and relax enjoy check it out!!!

My Goals Setting Presentation

The Fourth Fastest Man Who Ever Lived

                      The Fourth Fastest Man Who Ever Lived

Yohan Blake is at the London Olympic Games 2012 for the 200 meter finals. The crowd was roaring as like the top of the roof was going to come down. He was getting warmed up and listening to his beats headphones waiting in Anticipation for the officials to announce his name. He was so nervous and scared.

After all the training he's done now this is the day he shows it. when he got nervous and scared he went to the mens changing room and got his gear on and came outside onto the tracks as the officials announce his name. As they took their position Yohan Blake is standing on lane 4  stretching his carv muscles. As time ticks the officials introduces them.

On lane 1 is Asafa Powell,on lane 2 is Tyson Gay,on lane three Usain Bolt and on lane 4 Yohan Blake. As the officials announce take your position now. this is it the finals ON YOUR MARKS,GET SET,G O
As they take the lead Usain Bolt is coming a tie with Yohan Blake as tyson gay trying to catch up. as they go Yohan Blake shivers down the line coming first beating The man who hasn't lost a race in his entire career. Usain Bolt can not  believe this but as the two Jamaicas

Stands in front of the hole London Olympic 2012 winners the roaring crowd are like nothing he has felt before yohan blake is bursting with pride as the commentator puts the camera on him running around representing his country with a smile on his face.

Individual Description

Talofa lava and welcome to the adventure of me. Hi my name is Timothy and I have short bristly  black hair, I have a beautiful smile that sparkles like diamonds. I have deep varying shades of brown eyes. I wish that one day I will become a successful All Black. I am proud to be Samoan. I am short and of medium build. I am muscly but  not up to the standard that I would like to be. However lets move on with the story.

T is for Talent

I is for Intelligent  

M  is for Moonwalker

O is for Online

T is for Tough

H is for Helpful

Y is for Youth

This Is Me!!

My Family is awesome. In my family there are  3 sisters and 2 brothers. One sister goes to Tamaki College, that is Trish. My eldest sister works for a house painter. My little sister goes to Tamaki Primary. My little brother is in Samoa with my Aunty and my other brother who is 3, goes to a Samoan school in Glen Innes.My dad works in Mt Wellington and so does my Mother. My Dad and Mum are caring and they both spoil me and help with homework but not give me the answers. My sister Trish she is like the next Hulk that is going to smash me.

The community I live in is Tamaki. I live in G.I. I go church on sundays with my family and friends in Otara. I live in a place where there are heaps of people I can be friends with and I am getting to know them well. The best place I like going to is school, thats were I get my learning skills from my Teacher. The best teacher in the world is Ms Aireen.

In my family I am the third eldest boy and like to play rugby. When I was younger, my Dad would always give me the rugby ball to play with. My Dad inspired me to play rugby. When I turned 10, I played for the Manurewa Marlins Rugby League Team. My dad would always nag me to wake up for my rugby games. Then when I turned 11, I headed over to play for Varsity University. What I like about my culture is the food, especially pig. Every Sunday we always have a feast at the Pastors house. But what I like most about my culture is the Samoan traditional game Kilikiti.  My goal for 2013 is to start listening to the the teacher and keeping my hands of my keyboard when she tells to stop. 

                                              

                                                   

THAT'S MY ADVENTURE!!!

Master Shifu Writing

Long time ago outside the training door of the peace Valley there was a lonely  little snow leopard who was lying on top of the stairs. i gently picked it up and took it to the training room. i had trained him many years until he was growing older and older.then he was trained to be the dragon warrior he had been angry because he wasn't chosen to be our dragon warrior but then my brother master oog wei he had saw that tai lung had darkness in his heart.

The next year later my friend named po had a dream about him being in the furious five then he realized that it wasn't real.he woke up and then he tried to stand up but he couldn't then he stood up again and he made a noise and my friends dad could the duck goose bird he yelled out my friend po what is going on nothing he said so he walked as fast as he could down the stairs, and cheerfully delivered out the noodles to the costumes

Choosing of the dragon warrior my friend told everyone to go to the choosing of the dragon warrior then pos dad said would you go and deliver the noodles he was so angry that he had to take the noodles. then he went and he saw that the stairs were long going
He realized that there was a paper that said up the hill he pushed and pushed it up and he said that he was nearly there but when he looked down he was still there.

He lifted the noodles there and ran up when he got there he was puffed out.then the door was going to close so he yelled out wait,wait then he. then the door shut ted on him he was figuring out what to do so he looked in the little hole and it was starting then when he looked though again as the wind blew the the cover to close it so my friend po was looking for something to get in the dragon plaice so he got on a brunch and swag

It side to side and then he flew onto the the house and landed on to the platform were the fireworks were.so then he fort of and idea he tied the fireworks on to the chair and he lit it up and he waited for it to  BLAST then the chiar had fell so it didnt work.NEK MINIT he had blast though the wall rubbing hes face againest to the wall then flyng every were and
then he fell into the middle of the palace he had just fell in front of marster ogg wei

He picked my friend as dragon warrior. I was so lost what to do being a dragon warrior
they crowed cheered and then came four pigs lifting my friend on a stretcher and took him to the palace he was lost so he  saw the sword of heroes then he went he to see the vase and he touched it then it had cracked open so then master shifu didn't like po
he wasn't ready to fight he was just a fat chubby panda he didn't know how to fight

So then early in the morning he told everyone to came out of their cabins the tiger,crane,
monkey,viper snake,primantis came but then were was po we went to the training room